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Title: Mining In The Mind.
Post by: skycloudnz on February 03, 2009, 04:18:31 pm
Mining In The Mind
I saw the miner digging,
For coal within the mine,
It's dangerous work below,
The surface of the mind.

We fuel the fires,
That give us heat,
Forget the mines.
The coal and peat.

The forests that once grew,
Have died and sunk beneath,
The swampy treeland stew,
It's old but still has teeth.

The fuel that it provides,
Has dangers deep within,
It poisons  countrysides,
And sends us in a spin.

The dragons of the legends,
Helped eat the stormy brew,
They devoured what had no ends,
Now we must start anew.

© Sky


Title: Re: Mining In The Mind.
Post by: Cool Hand on February 04, 2009, 08:34:42 am
i like this poem.
Mining in the mind is deep, to deep for me.but i still like it.
i will write a poem and post it later . see what you think about it.