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« on: June 26, 2008, 02:11:52 pm »
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I like the poem but I also thought Omnia's critique was funny...like this comment;




How comes she takes her mini-skirt off over her head?
First of all keep it on, far more fun, secondly skirts go down - much quicker, more tantalising, and it won't get tangled in her hair. Or is she bald?



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